1. Posted: June 15, 2015In:

    A reformed bully returns for his school reunion, falling into a deadly trap, as he and his friends are hunted down by an old victim.

    Monsteruss

    Maybe... Although the name of the victim turned killer is known, so there's no mystery there.

    Maybe… Although the name of the victim turned killer is known, so there’s no mystery there.

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  2. Posted: June 15, 2015In:

    When a frustrated public servant is fired from his meaningless job, he decides to become a masked vigilante, protecting his neighbourhood.

    Monsteruss

    I like this is the most out of your three as well, but it risks being dangerously close to being "Super". Why does np he need to protect his neighbourhood... Hope this helps.

    I like this is the most out of your three as well, but it risks being dangerously close to being “Super”. Why does np he need to protect his neighbourhood… Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: June 15, 2015In:

    A kid named Jack who comes from a devout mormon family who all wear the infamous Magic Underwear starts going to kindergarten and starts getting bullied and after that he starts questioning his faith.

    Monsteruss

    A little long... Seems to be missing an ending,

    A little long… Seems to be missing an ending,

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