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  1. Posted: November 20, 2014In: Public

    When her bandmates get implicated in a bad drug deal, a geek must gather ecstasy from seagull corpses to repay the debt.

    West Monstrosity
    Added an answer on November 21, 2014 at 12:27 pm

    Yes it's an oddball comedy, and the seagull caper is that in Kings Cross, a percentage of pills dropped on the ground are eaten by greedy seagulls. If you find a dead seagull, you get a free pill. New version: When her bandmates get mixed up in a bad drug deal, a geeky raver finds a way to extract eRead more

    Yes it’s an oddball comedy, and the seagull caper is that in Kings Cross, a percentage of pills dropped on the ground are eaten by greedy seagulls. If you find a dead seagull, you get a free pill.

    New version:
    When her bandmates get mixed up in a bad drug deal, a geeky raver finds a way to extract ecstasy from seagull corpses to repay the debt.

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  2. Posted: November 20, 2014In: Public

    A bereaved businessman becomes obsessed with the identity of an amnesia sufferer who saves his life only to become embroiled in a supernatural conflict that threatens to claim everything he holds close.

    West Monstrosity
    Added an answer on November 20, 2014 at 11:38 pm

    I'm pretty new at this, but it feels like too much info, and it's a bit confusing. Businessmen don't seem that interesting- Could he be described another way? "Everything he holds close" seems a bit cliche. Maybe the specifics of what is threatened would be more interesting? However I'm sure it's grRead more

    I’m pretty new at this, but it feels like too much info, and it’s a bit confusing.
    Businessmen don’t seem that interesting-
    Could he be described another way? “Everything he holds close” seems a bit cliche. Maybe the specifics of what is threatened would be more interesting?
    However I’m sure it’s great!!

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  3. Posted: November 20, 2014In: Public

    A bereaved businessman becomes obsessed with the identity of an amnesia sufferer who saves his life only to become embroiled in a supernatural conflict that threatens to claim everything he holds close.

    West Monstrosity
    Added an answer on November 20, 2014 at 11:38 pm

    I'm pretty new at this, but it feels like too much info, and it's a bit confusing. Businessmen don't seem that interesting- Could he be described another way? "Everything he holds close" seems a bit cliche. Maybe the specifics of what is threatened would be more interesting? However I'm sure it's grRead more

    I’m pretty new at this, but it feels like too much info, and it’s a bit confusing.
    Businessmen don’t seem that interesting-
    Could he be described another way? “Everything he holds close” seems a bit cliche. Maybe the specifics of what is threatened would be more interesting?
    However I’m sure it’s great!!

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