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  1. Posted: February 26, 2015In: Public

    A young girl has the ability to create reality through her sketches, now her mother must protect her child from secretive agencies that want to exploit her power.

    MusicForte
    Added an answer on February 27, 2015 at 4:25 pm

    An interesting idea. The phrase "secretive agencies" seems like it could be worded in a more interesting way. Maybe a more specific agency or someone specific from one of those agencies?

    An interesting idea. The phrase “secretive agencies” seems like it could be worded in a more interesting way. Maybe a more specific agency or someone specific from one of those agencies?

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  2. Posted: February 26, 2015In: Public

    A young girl has the ability to create reality through her sketches, now her mother must protect her child from secretive agencies that want to exploit her power.

    MusicForte
    Added an answer on February 27, 2015 at 4:25 pm

    An interesting idea. The phrase "secretive agencies" seems like it could be worded in a more interesting way. Maybe a more specific agency or someone specific from one of those agencies?

    An interesting idea. The phrase “secretive agencies” seems like it could be worded in a more interesting way. Maybe a more specific agency or someone specific from one of those agencies?

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  3. Posted: February 27, 2015In: Public

    A lonely vacuum salesman, unsure of his true calling, happens upon love and struggles to walk the line between his familiar life and the extraordinary.

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    Added an answer on February 27, 2015 at 4:19 pm

    You are right! Thank you :). This is my first log line and I'm very new to screenwriting and creative writing in general but I love storytelling and films. I hope to get better! How is this revised version? A lonely vacuum salesman, unsure of his true calling, happens upon an exciting new love. As sRead more

    You are right! Thank you :). This is my first log line and I’m very new to screenwriting and creative writing in general but I love storytelling and films. I hope to get better! How is this revised version?

    A lonely vacuum salesman, unsure of his true calling, happens upon an exciting new love. As she gradually reveals her troubling past, he struggles to maintain balance between his familiar life and the extraordinary.

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