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?Two uninspired and perpetually high film students document the final days of an emotionally destroyed detective, believing his demise will give their career the kick-start it needs.?
SunsetCoast thinks the detective does because the students are documenting "the final days of an emotionally destroyed detective." While some of SunsetCoast's questions may not need to be in the logline, he is right to wonder who the main characters are. The students sound like they're the focus, buRead more
SunsetCoast thinks the detective does because the students are documenting “the final days of an emotionally destroyed detective.”
While some of SunsetCoast’s questions may not need to be in the logline, he is right to wonder who the main characters are. The students sound like they’re the focus, but the detective sounds more interesting.
What’s missing is the conflict, where things go wrong. What sends them off on the real adventure that they can’t come back from. Alain_Alfaro is totally right, this is a great opportunity for a detective story with two unequipped students who inherit the case.
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Maybe something like... "When a hole swallows a bus of New York City commuters and places them out of the reach of rescue, an Army reject must find the courage to help get everyone to safety and avoid the creatures that caused the collapse." I'm making an assumption that the creatures were involvedRead more
Maybe something like… “When a hole swallows a bus of New York City commuters and places them out of the reach of rescue, an Army reject must find the courage to help get everyone to safety and avoid the creatures that caused the collapse.” I’m making an assumption that the creatures were involved in the accident.
See lessA hotshot reality TV cameraman tries to outsmart a stalker who records him in his home and airs the footage on television.
I think what's missing is why recording him matters. "But when the stalker realizes he's on camera..." or something in that arena is missing. Also are there really "hotshot reality TV cameramen?" And, who is the stalker stalking? If its the cameraman, that seems unlikely. In that case, it might moreRead more
I think what’s missing is why recording him matters. “But when the stalker realizes he’s on camera…” or something in that arena is missing.
Also are there really “hotshot reality TV cameramen?” And, who is the stalker stalking? If its the cameraman, that seems unlikely. In that case, it might more sense if the reality hotshot is someone who produces and hosts his own show and has his team install the cameras.
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