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After becoming the sole survivor of his adventuring party a barbarian now protects the town’s children by slaying the monsters under their beds. But when a rise in monster attacks threatens everyone, he must overcome his survivor’s guilt and PTSD to save the town.
Sounds like an interesting concept. Good stuff Perhaps the two sentences could be shortened and still accomplish the goal. For example: After becoming the sole survivor of his adventuring party, a barbarian with PTSD must save the town's orphans by slaying the monsters under their beds. I assumed thRead more
Sounds like an interesting concept. Good stuff
Perhaps the two sentences could be shortened and still accomplish the goal. For example:
After becoming the sole survivor of his adventuring party, a barbarian with PTSD must save the town’s orphans by slaying the monsters under their beds.
I assumed the children were orphans. I hope to see the final script!
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This is an interesting story. I appreciate the process in this forum, to help writers work through their ideas. I think the original was good. Regarding the word "grooming" used in the later version, it didn't strike me as a negative, when I read it. I hope we get to read the script when you finishRead more
This is an interesting story. I appreciate the process in this forum, to help writers work through their ideas.
I think the original was good.
Regarding the word “grooming” used in the later version, it didn’t strike me as a negative, when I read it. I hope we get to read the script when you finish it!
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