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To save her people from extinction, a nanotech-specialist and her ultra-robot are sent to seek natives for gene-samples in a terrifying jungle, where they face a dangerous super-intelligence.
>>>> The plot is still unclear. So this superintelligence attacks her after she begins her research and wasn?t even known to humanity before any of this? It has been known, but it has not been expected in that area (the jungle) because the gigantic, super-intelligent creature normally liRead more
>>>> The plot is still unclear. So this superintelligence attacks her after she begins her research and wasn?t even known to humanity before any of this?
It has been known, but it has not been expected in that area (the jungle) because the gigantic, super-intelligent creature normally lives in the oceans.? The creature controls the clouds to uses them as memory, a fact that becomes clear later in the story. When the researcher in her robot wants to go down through the clouds, she gets shot down. Then her struggle begins. The fact, that creature wants something that is located in the jungle and which is something that the protagonist needs to reach her goal? is a secret which will be revealed during her ‘hero’s journey’.
I don’t want to type the entire synopsis here… is it allowed to post a dropbox link here, where you guys can download a one page synopsis?
BTW… I appreciate your constructive criticism very much… because creating a good logline is HELL !…haha
See lessTo save her people from extinction, a nanotech-specialist and her ultra-robot are sent to seek natives for gene-samples in a terrifying jungle, where they face a dangerous super-intelligence.
The dangerous super-intelligence is the antagonist/main obstacle, which impedes the researcher to reach her goal. In the terrifying jungle it is hard to survive. That sounds enough for a good adventure, but the dangerous super-intelligence makes it even more difficult... spicy... it raises the stakeRead more
The dangerous super-intelligence is the antagonist/main obstacle, which impedes the researcher to reach her goal. In the terrifying jungle it is hard to survive. That sounds enough for a good adventure, but the dangerous super-intelligence makes it even more difficult… spicy… it raises the stake and makes the story more interesting, because this is something new, in that case.
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