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Disillusioned with social media’s influence, Lightning Girl retires, but she’s forced into one final battle, without superhero powers, when her nemesis, her brother, cuts off Seattle’s water supply.
Is it comedy? It seems where a plot is being forced to a very passive character... (Hancock) and thats one way to do a comedy. I see the wordplay "disillusioned" and a plot where she will illuminate again on bonding with brother... but again "estranged" leads to a plot to discover a character who evRead more
Is it comedy? It seems where a plot is being forced to a very passive character… (Hancock) and thats one way to do a comedy.
I see the wordplay “disillusioned” and a plot where she will illuminate again on bonding with brother… but again “estranged” leads to a plot to discover a character who eventually will be her nemesis. But I am more interested in watersupply problem being a forced plot for comedy… How? Unclear from a logline.
“A dejected superhero with electrical powers is buzzed to face his/her estranged non-superhero brother when he threatens to harm the source of supply of his/her powers.”
A sibling quarrel throughout 😂😂! More of a home video than a film though. I would watch it.
See lessAfter a chance meeting with his high school sweetheart reminds him he?s not who he aspired to be, a responsible 29-year-old risks his healthy relationship and stable career to live the life he dreamt of.
Right now your logline suggests this:When his high-school romance shows up with a promising marriage proposal, an aspiring (??) romantic, committed lad struggles to choose the best partner.I think you know what this lacks and I would like to read the better version, as this leans more towards a comeRead more
Right now your logline suggests this:
When his high-school romance shows up with a promising marriage proposal, an aspiring (??) romantic, committed lad struggles to choose the best partner.
I think you know what this lacks and I would like to read the better version, as this leans more towards a comedy.
See lessSent directly to earth from the Creator, to raise up their Race of Beings who have fallen prey. Things get deadly.
Look buddy, along with? trying the formula tab of this website, try to exercise:A) Writing a brief that gives your whole idea in few words (one must be able to see the whole movie/story from those few words)B) Writing story outlines (e.g., a brief story of 25 pages. This is more like an exercise thaRead more
Look buddy, along with? trying the formula tab of this website, try to exercise:
A) Writing a brief that gives your whole idea in few words (one must be able to see the whole movie/story from those few words)
B) Writing story outlines (e.g., a brief story of 25 pages. This is more like an exercise that will allow you to write any logline in future, without practising this point.)
C) Tackling reviewers. (Reviewers come up with better opinions but you must be able to tackle them with your storyline you already created. If you like the crticism accept it and if you don’t, then try to learn more perspectives. This will make your content more better.)
???????? (I am laughing at lecturing, but this is more a general review than to this particular logline.)
Above logline is just a theme to your character, a part of a backstory. I do not see any challenge for him to overcome.
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