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Is logline.it a questions answers website like answersmode.com ?
I think layout! But I am sure this is not Quora!????
I think layout! But I am sure this is not Quora!????
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It can be better and more cinematic. This is just an incident that happens in his journey. But you need to mention his journey, his struggles (in writing language - a character's conflict). The character you chose has a great inner conflict (fighting out for his sexuality) and exterior conflict (beiRead more
It can be better and more cinematic. This is just an incident that happens in his journey. But you need to mention his journey, his struggles (in writing language – a character’s conflict). The character you chose has a great inner conflict (fighting out for his sexuality) and exterior conflict (being bullied). Make this a journey. (You do have a jouney in your mind but that needs to be reflected in your logline).
When a reader reads a logline he must clearly see your movie. (If it’s a suspense try hooking your reader without giving out suspense but atleast make them root for your charater’s journey.)
First logline or one of many, you must practice writing, no matter what you write.
See lessWhen his reflection changes to a young woman who needs his help, a reclusive author must enter Miraland and lead the rebellion against the crooked regime before the corruption spills into the real world.
Given that your premise is interesting, it lacks clarity. You need to specify the nature of corruption and the threat of crooked regime. What will the crooked regime do that shall affect your character and the Miraland's population?
Given that your premise is interesting, it lacks clarity. You need to specify the nature of corruption and the threat of crooked regime. What will the crooked regime do that shall affect your character and the Miraland’s population?
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