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A story based on the life of Marek Edelman, the last leader of the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising: When the Nazis set up the ghetto, orphaned Jewish errand boy decides to stay with his beloved and print the underground press, but when the Nazis start liquidating the ghetto, he saves his comrades, becoming the last leader of the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising.
Hi, English is not my mother tongue so I apologize for any mistakes! I'd appreciate your hints! I have a problem with the transformation of a hero, the point is that he changed from an arrogant, careless, insignificant orphan into a hard and ruthless leader of the Jewish uprising in three years, andRead more
Hi, English is not my mother tongue so I apologize for any mistakes!
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I have a problem with the transformation of a hero, the point is that he changed from an arrogant, careless, insignificant orphan into a hard and ruthless leader of the Jewish uprising in three years, and I don’t know how to include this in the last part of the logline. That is, he actually had to become a better person, to overcome the consequences of his orphanage in order to take responsibility for his comrades and stand up to fight. I don’t know if this is visible in my logline.
A reckless, arrogant young Jewish hospital messenger rescues his relatives from the liquidation of the ghetto and becomes the last leader of the Warsaw ghetto uprising.
DPG: Thank you for such a great answer! I will do as you wrote! Thank you for such words of support and enthusiasm, I also think I need to tell his story, and I have been reaserch to her since August, now it's time to act. I sit down to write a logline and correct it, I will post next versions withRead more
DPG:
Thank you for such a great answer! I will do as you wrote! Thank you for such words of support and enthusiasm, I also think I need to tell his story, and I have been reaserch to her since August, now it’s time to act. I sit down to write a logline and correct it, I will post next versions with your comments and I hope for further suggestions from you.
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A reckless, arrogant young Jewish hospital messenger rescues his relatives from the liquidation of the ghetto and becomes the last leader of the Warsaw ghetto uprising.
Thank you all for the answers, I'm going to work on improving the logline with your comments, I will post the corrected versions soon!
Thank you all for the answers, I’m going to work on improving the logline with your comments, I will post the corrected versions soon!
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