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  1. Posted: August 26, 2021In: Drama

    A spirited daughter of Italian immigrants experiences first love while battling family disapproval and a massive tank of molasses that threatens to demolish her Boston neighborhood.

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    Replied to answer on August 30, 2021 at 2:15 am

    Alright. Guess I just need some info on why the molasses are important to the story and what it has to do with the love story... And.. maybe the opponents are too many... Let's see: What if... When a massive tank of molasses threatens to demolish her neighborhood, a spirited daughter of Italian immiRead more

    Alright.
    Guess I just need some info on why the molasses are important to the story and what it has to do with the love story…
    And.. maybe the opponents are too many… Let’s see:

    What if…

    When a massive tank of molasses threatens to demolish her neighborhood, a spirited daughter of Italian immigrants must let go of her first true love and move far away with her parents – or find a way for the neighborhood, and her relationship with her love to survive.

    I think this shows you can’t have 2 main opponents (parents AND melasses). But maybe I’m wrong…. πŸ™‚
    Happy writing. πŸ™‚

    Nis, Denmark

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  2. Posted: August 27, 2021In: Drama

    With no justice for the recent death of a gay dancer, a frustrated editor feels compelled to give his death meaning, while searching for his own.

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    Replied to answer on August 30, 2021 at 1:55 am

    You are welcome, Elias! Happy to help! :)

    You are welcome, Elias! Happy to help! πŸ™‚

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2021In: Drama

    An ethics prof and family man must prove his rehabilitation to a court-appointed psychiatrist when found not guilty of rape by reason of insanity and committed to a mental asylum.

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    Added an answer on August 29, 2021 at 7:04 pm

    I think the brain tumor is important here. If you read about the brain, it’s exciting how it works just like a computer with primal needs in one end and human restrictions in the frontal end. What happens with a deeply moral civilized man if you disable the part of the brain (frontal lopes) that makRead more

    I think the brain tumor is important here. If you read about the brain, it’s exciting how it works just like a computer with primal needs in one end and human restrictions in the frontal end. What happens with a deeply moral civilized man if you disable the part of the brain (frontal lopes) that make him a human? Thematically I think this is an exciting question. How close is human to animal. This off course requires a sidekick to the professor. One who can give us the sympathy with the professor. Perhaps consider the sidekick a main character and use the professor as the mental case explored. Nis, Denmark

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