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Patrick, who has struggled with the demon dyslexia all his life, finds himself at crossroads when he meets a young gang member who is trapped in the same vicious cycle.
While it's good that you have a name for the character, it does little to describe the character to the audience. How has struggling with dyslexia affected him as an individual? How does it affect his interactions with others? Beyond that, the protagonist needs an action. He needs something to do.
While it’s good that you have a name for the character, it does little to describe the character to the audience. How has struggling with dyslexia affected him as an individual? How does it affect his interactions with others?
Beyond that, the protagonist needs an action. He needs something to do.
See lessWhen two girls are kidnapped memories from the past drive a psychology student to hunt for the man who took her and her sister 14 years ago.
There is something here that would make a good story, it just needs a little bit of tidying. I think dpg struck something here. I think you?re referencing a serial kidnapper, or something akin to that. You just need to make that part a little more clear.
There is something here that would make a good story, it just needs a little bit of tidying. I think dpg struck something here. I think you?re referencing a serial kidnapper, or something akin to that. You just need to make that part a little more clear.
See lessWhen a grieving teacher is blackmailed over the death of his brother, he decides to silence the blackmailer and frame his widow?s new lover for the murder.
I like this. It starts strong. It ends strong. There?s a lot of intrigue here, and as I reread it, I can?t help but be slightly confused. What drives a character to escalate so quickly from being blackmailed to murdering and framing the murder on someone else? I wonder if you could tie the characterRead more
I like this. It starts strong. It ends strong. There?s a lot of intrigue here, and as I reread it, I can?t help but be slightly confused. What drives a character to escalate so quickly from being blackmailed to murdering and framing the murder on someone else? I wonder if you could tie the characters closer together in the story.
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