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Before setting out to bring his estranged daughter back, an embattled doctor questions ethical behavior and makes a fateful decision to cheat the organ sharing waitlist.
I did not read the additional text as the logline should stand alone. Where does the embattled doctor bring his daughter back from? Whose ethical behaviour is the doctor questioning? Who is the doctor cheating the organ sharing (sic) waitlist for? How is bringing his daughter back linked to cheatingRead more
I did not read the additional text as the logline should stand alone.
Where does the embattled doctor bring his daughter back from? Whose ethical behaviour is the doctor questioning? Who is the doctor cheating the organ sharing (sic) waitlist for? How is bringing his daughter back linked to cheating the waitlist?
There is no cause and effect in this logline. There should be an event and as a result, action is taken. Questioning ethics is not an event.
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I'm confused as to what is the event in your logline. Is it the freak accident or the gaining of the memories of a combustive war veteran? Either way, you need to tell us what the action is that the main character needs to take as a result of the event i.e. When a pacifist school teacher gains the mRead more
I’m confused as to what is the event in your logline. Is it the freak accident or the gaining of the memories of a combustive war veteran? Either way, you need to tell us what the action is that the main character needs to take as a result of the event i.e. When a pacifist school teacher gains the memories of a combustive veteran he must [insert action here]
See lessWhen a secret agent is served a burn notice to end his career, he must use his skills of deception and investigation to track down those responsible and get his job back. In the meantime, he’s open for hire to those who need his help.
Why is it important for the ex-agent to get his job back? What is a stake if he doesn't?
Why is it important for the ex-agent to get his job back? What is a stake if he doesn’t?
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