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Discovering that her estranged father has stolen a map to Neverland, an independent rouge agrees to deliver it to a banished Captain Hook, battling against Peter Pan and his Lost Boys in the process.
I don't get a sense of what is at stake here for the main character or the inhabitants of the story world. So what if Captain Hook gets his hands on the map? What happens to the main character if she can't deliver the map? You are also using characters who are already established as good guys and baRead more
I don’t get a sense of what is at stake here for the main character or the inhabitants of the story world. So what if Captain Hook gets his hands on the map? What happens to the main character if she can’t deliver the map?
You are also using characters who are already established as good guys and bad guys. Are you subverting this? If so how? If not, why do we care if your hero wins?
See lessDriven to the edge of sanity, resigned to his fate, HUMPTIE de UMPTIE tries to commit suicide; when THE LITTLE LAMB arrives, hindering his every attempt to succeed.
I don't get a sense of how this story will sustain a feature-length film. It will suffer from being multiple versions of the same scene, Humptie attempting suicide and the Lamb stopping him.
I don’t get a sense of how this story will sustain a feature-length film. It will suffer from being multiple versions of the same scene, Humptie attempting suicide and the Lamb stopping him.
See lessEvery prophet assembles in Vedic woods when three missing children’s voyage inside the human brain unfolds a stunning battlefield where the devil imprisoned God for ages. A mission begins to liberate God while Buddha emerges as the last resort to unzip recession and stress from deceptive human life.
Who owns the mission to liberate God? Whose story is this? Reading this logline it feels like there are three stories running simultaneously.
Who owns the mission to liberate God? Whose story is this? Reading this logline it feels like there are three stories running simultaneously.
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