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  1. Posted: August 31, 2015In: Public

    Against a backdrop of growing religious conflict with a foreign civilization, an idealistic scientist seeks truth while a young civil servant seeks power.

    olatundew
    Added an answer on August 31, 2015 at 10:06 pm

    Thanks, both helpful. "As their city is plunged into religious turbulence and war, an idealistic scientist uncovers its dark past while an ambitious civil servant seeks the power to shape its future."

    Thanks, both helpful.

    “As their city is plunged into religious turbulence and war, an idealistic scientist uncovers its dark past while an ambitious civil servant seeks the power to shape its future.”

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  2. Posted: August 31, 2015In: Public

    Against a backdrop of growing religious conflict with a foreign civilization, an idealistic scientist seeks truth while a young civil servant seeks power.

    olatundew
    Added an answer on August 31, 2015 at 5:57 am

    "Amid religious turbulence and war, an idealistic scientist seeks the truth while a young civil servant seeks power." That's a good question, because I'm struggling to define it. Both are from the same side in the war, but take very different positions (i.e. one is pro-war, the other anti). But as tRead more

    “Amid religious turbulence and war, an idealistic scientist seeks the truth while a young civil servant seeks power.”

    That’s a good question, because I’m struggling to define it. Both are from the same side in the war, but take very different positions (i.e. one is pro-war, the other anti). But as they don’t interact directly, I’ve seen them more as contrasting roles than opposing.

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  3. Posted: August 31, 2015In: Public

    A once indulgent father now battles his spoiled children who are stealing his retirement money.

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    Added an answer on August 31, 2015 at 4:40 am

    Indulgent of his children, or self-indulgent? One is certainly more sympathetic than the other! I assume 'spoiled children' means the former - but maybe it could be clearer?

    Indulgent of his children, or self-indulgent? One is certainly more sympathetic than the other! I assume ‘spoiled children’ means the former – but maybe it could be clearer?

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