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  1. Posted: September 17, 2013In: Public

    On the verge of destroying his career and his marriage, a washed up writer imprisons himself in his office where his characters begin to appear in the flesh, but when they are murdered one by one, he must come to terms with the dark secrets of his childhood before he loses his livelihood, his family and his sanity.

    W Siegfried Jerrett
    Added an answer on September 17, 2013 at 7:54 am

    Great feedback and excellent pun !! Based on your comments, how about this : When a washed up writer starts living in his office his characters begin appearing in the flesh, but as they are murdered one by one, he must face his dark childhood secrets or risk losing his livelihood, family and sanity.Read more

    Great feedback and excellent pun !! Based on your comments, how about this :

    When a washed up writer starts living in his office his characters begin appearing in the flesh, but as they are murdered one by one, he must face his dark childhood secrets or risk losing his livelihood, family and sanity.

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  2. Posted: September 17, 2013In: Public

    On the verge of destroying his career and his marriage, a washed up writer imprisons himself in his office where his characters begin to appear in the flesh, but when they are murdered one by one, he must come to terms with the dark secrets of his childhood before he loses his livelihood, his family and his sanity.

    W Siegfried Jerrett
    Added an answer on September 17, 2013 at 7:53 am

    Great feedback and excellent pun !! Based on your comments, how about this : When a washed up writer starts living in his office his characters begin appearing in the flesh, but as they are murdered one by one, he must face his dark childhood secrets or risk losing his livelihood, family and sanity.Read more

    Great feedback and excellent pun !! Based on your comments, how about this :

    When a washed up writer starts living in his office his characters begin appearing in the flesh, but as they are murdered one by one, he must face his dark childhood secrets or risk losing his livelihood, family and sanity.

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  3. Posted: September 16, 2013In: Public

    An amateur conwoman attempts to manipulate a paranoid ex-con into getting rid of the landlord who's blackmailing her. But as his illness deepens can either of them trust anyone?

    W Siegfried Jerrett
    Added an answer on September 17, 2013 at 4:30 am

    I am sure there is a great story here but for me it is not coming through totally clear yet two things struck me, i was not sure whose illness it was, the landlord or the ex-con and for some reason i had to read it a couple of times to understand it,

    I am sure there is a great story here but for me it is not coming through totally clear yet two things struck me, i was not sure whose illness it was, the landlord or the ex-con and for some reason i had to read it a couple of times to understand it,

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