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An illegal gun store owner and father to be chases freedom from a world of violence he helped to create.
I appreciate the feedback. This is the latest version of it before I saw everyone's comments: "A sneaker store owner must choose between his profitable illegal gun business and his pregnant wife, a community organizer, amid the neighborhood he destroys."
I appreciate the feedback. This is the latest version of it before I saw everyone’s comments: “A sneaker store owner must choose between his profitable illegal gun business and his pregnant wife, a community organizer, amid the neighborhood he destroys.”
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I actually think this is much better but still could use some help: "A community activist's husband must choose between his profitable illegal gun store and his family amid a world of violence he helped to create."
I actually think this is much better but still could use some help: “A community activist’s husband must choose between his profitable illegal gun store and his family amid a world of violence he helped to create.”
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I'm amending it to "A successful illegal gun store owner and father to be chases freedom from a world of violence he helped to create."
I’m amending it to “A successful illegal gun store owner and father to be chases freedom from a world of violence he helped to create.”
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