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  1. Posted: April 17, 2013

    A college photography student who discovers terrifying images of ghostly children in her shots of an abandoned amusement park races to uncover a decades-old mystery to save her son from the vengeful spirits.

    patricks
    Added an answer on April 22, 2013 at 5:52 am

    Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I've been taking it all in and breaking the story some more - here's a newer version: When a young mother whose photos capture terrifying images of the spirit world discovers ghostly intruders in her home, her quest to find out why leads her to an abandoned amusemeRead more

    Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I’ve been taking it all in and breaking the story some more – here’s a newer version:

    When a young mother whose photos capture terrifying images of the spirit world discovers ghostly intruders in her home, her quest to find out why leads her to an abandoned amusement park haunted by slain children and filled with decades-old secrets she must unlock to save herself and her son.

    Or, a shorter version:

    A young mother whose photos reveal ghostly images menacing her son finds they are connected to an abandoned amusement park haunted by slain children.

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  2. Posted: April 17, 2013

    A college photography student who discovers terrifying images of ghostly children in her shots of an abandoned amusement park races to uncover a decades-old mystery to save her son from the vengeful spirits.

    patricks
    Added an answer on April 17, 2013 at 3:58 pm

    This was the original: When a college photography student finds images of ghostly children in her photos of an abandoned amusement park, her investigation into a decades-old series of slayings puts her own life at risk. (I asked the admins to delete it since I had the new one, and hadn't seen any coRead more

    This was the original: When a college photography student finds images of ghostly children in her photos of an abandoned amusement park, her investigation into a decades-old series of slayings puts her own life at risk.

    (I asked the admins to delete it since I had the new one, and hadn’t seen any comments – don’t know what happened to yours, but I’d be interested to see what you thought).

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2013In: Public

    On the eve of World War Two, a reporter traveling aboard the Orient Express must expose a conspiracy, solve an impossible crime, outwit a spy, trap a killer, repel a Nazi attack, save the lives of all the passengers and persuade his beautiful traveling companion to like him just a little. He has forty-eight hours. No rush.

    patricks
    Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 5:32 pm

    I realize you're trying to build to the punchline of your hero having to accomplish six impossible things before breakfast, but after the first three or four tasks my brain just shut down.

    I realize you’re trying to build to the punchline of your hero having to accomplish six impossible things before breakfast, but after the first three or four tasks my brain just shut down.

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