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  1. Posted: November 19, 2016In: Drama

    In order to graduate film school, a self-centered student documents his terminally ill father’s attempt to recapture the heart of a former lover, prior to her impending marriage.

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    Added an answer on November 21, 2016 at 11:08 am

    What about this approach? After his youngest child graduates high school, a cancer stricken father must track down his one true love before he dies.

    What about this approach?

    After his youngest child graduates high school, a cancer stricken father must track down his one true love before he dies.

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  2. Posted: November 16, 2016In: SciFi

    After an injury ruins hisscholarship, a teen jock must must defeat the school genius to win a robotics competition in order to fund his invention that will allow him to pursue his dream of playing college football.

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    Added an answer on November 17, 2016 at 12:56 pm

    Seems a little far fetched to me...that a non researcher or heavy science person could just magically come up with a solution to say "fixing an ACL tear, a common, but highly scientific procedure." What if the jock sacrifice his body for the same optimist goal? More real, and more dangerous. SomethiRead more

    Seems a little far fetched to me…that a non researcher or heavy science person could just magically come up with a solution to say “fixing an ACL tear, a common, but highly scientific procedure.” What if the jock sacrifice his body for the same optimist goal? More real, and more dangerous.

    Something like this:
    After an injury ruins his scholarship, a jock volunteers for experimental robotic procedures to help him, and thousands of others, restore independent mobility.

    A noble cause…and what could possibly go wrong? ?

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2016In: Drama

    After a popular police officer is suspended indefinitely for shooting a black teen, a desk duty officer seizes his opportunity to be a hero, serving as his town’s only source of law enforcement when the rest of the police force protests by calling in “sick” for a week.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2016 at 8:51 am

    MC: young police officer MC flaw: scared of confrontation Action: Violence without police Goal: protect his family

    MC: young police officer
    MC flaw: scared of confrontation
    Action: Violence without police
    Goal: protect his family

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