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  1. Posted: June 2, 2016In: Drama

    When a college student falls in love with wakeboarding while preparing to win the Women?s World Amateur Golf Tournament, she must decide whether to pursue a future of money and stability, or passion and uncertainty.

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    Added an answer on June 2, 2016 at 5:51 am

    Yes, agreed! Thank you for the insight! Below is a revised concept: After suffering public humiliation and a ban from women?s golf, the one-time phenom helps a female wakeboarder raise funding to bring back a women?s division to the Pro Wakeboard Tour.

    Yes, agreed! Thank you for the insight! Below is a revised concept:
    After suffering public humiliation and a ban from women?s golf, the one-time phenom helps a female wakeboarder raise funding to bring back a women?s division to the Pro Wakeboard Tour.

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  2. Posted: June 2, 2016In: Drama

    When a college student falls in love with wakeboarding while preparing to win the Women?s World Amateur Golf Tournament, she must decide whether to pursue a future of money and stability, or passion and uncertainty.

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    Added an answer on June 2, 2016 at 4:00 am

    How is this revised approach: After being publicly humiliated & temporarily? banned for cheating in the Women's World Amateur Golf Championship, a determined teen enlists the help of a disgraced wakeboarder to win a major wakeboard contest and restore her name to prominence.

    How is this revised approach:

    After being publicly humiliated & temporarily? banned for cheating in the Women’s World Amateur Golf Championship, a determined teen enlists the help of a disgraced wakeboarder to win a major wakeboard contest and restore her name to prominence.

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  3. Posted: June 2, 2016In: Drama

    When a college student falls in love with wakeboarding while preparing to win the Women?s World Amateur Golf Tournament, she must decide whether to pursue a future of money and stability, or passion and uncertainty.

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    Added an answer on June 2, 2016 at 2:01 am

    Thoughts on this revision: After she loses her #1 women's world amateur golf ranking, a rebellious college student quits golf to win a wakeboard contest to escape her abusive and controlling father.

    Thoughts on this revision:

    After she loses her #1 women’s world amateur golf ranking, a rebellious college student quits golf to win a wakeboard contest to escape her abusive and controlling father.

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