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When a brain injury puts a surefire pro football prospect's institutional loyalty into question, he must rediscover himself and rise to protect his teammates from a ruthless coaching staff.
nduchene: Can you unpack your story by Act? What is the inciting incident in Act 1? Where, in your synopsis, does Act 2 begin? Where, in your synopsis, does Act 3 begin?
nduchene:
Can you unpack your story by Act? What is the inciting incident in Act 1? Where, in your synopsis, does Act 2 begin? Where, in your synopsis, does Act 3 begin?
See lessWhen an elderly man sues a large bank for foreclosing on him due to a data error, he dies of a heart attack in court, and his daughter then brings a wrongful death suit against the same bank.
I don't find the scenario particularly plausible nor the daughter sympathetic. Why should I want her to get all that money when she's not the real victim? The victim is the elderly man and he's dead. And he was an elderly man. His days were numbered anyway, doomed to die sooner rather than later ofRead more
I don’t find the scenario particularly plausible nor the daughter sympathetic.
Why should I want her to get all that money when she’s not the real victim? The victim is the elderly man and he’s dead.
And he was an elderly man. His days were numbered anyway, doomed to die sooner rather than later of something. And at his age the odds are not in his favor that it wouldn’t be a heart attack — it’s a leading cause of death for the elderly.
And one lawsuit by one person over one mortgage error is going to bring a BIG bad bank to financial ruin? How much is the greedy gal suing for? Why does she deserve all that money when it’s the old man who suffered?
See lessWhen the son of an overly protective mother is told he has terminal cancer he decides to run away from home to experience life rather than spend his final days dying under the watch of his smothering mom.
Title: Dying to Live I suggest he ought to be running away not just to live more fully in general, but to fulfill a specific dream (objective goal). As to the nature of that dream -- well, there are so many choices. Take your pick.
Title: Dying to Live
I suggest he ought to be running away not just to live more fully in general, but to fulfill a specific dream (objective goal). As to the nature of that dream — well, there are so many choices. Take your pick.
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