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  1. Posted: December 30, 2014In: Public

    After the death of an elderly millionaire, his estranged offspring haul their families cross-country in order to retrieve their deceased father’s inheritance.

    Peter Nguyen Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 30, 2014 at 5:54 pm

    If you?re going for a family comedy kind of thing then I would write something like this: When an elderly millionaire dies, his estranged(or *bickering*) children and their families are forced to take a road trip together across the country to retrieve their father?s inheritance. It creates a senseRead more

    If you?re going for a family comedy kind of thing then I would write something like this:

    When an elderly millionaire dies, his estranged(or *bickering*) children and their families are forced to take a road trip together across the country to retrieve their father?s inheritance.

    It creates a sense of conflict/tension and show there?s potential for funny moments.

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: December 30, 2014In: Public

    After the death of an elderly millionaire, his estranged offspring haul their families cross-country in order to retrieve their deceased father’s inheritance.

    Peter Nguyen Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 30, 2014 at 5:54 pm

    If you?re going for a family comedy kind of thing then I would write something like this: When an elderly millionaire dies, his estranged(or *bickering*) children and their families are forced to take a road trip together across the country to retrieve their father?s inheritance. It creates a senseRead more

    If you?re going for a family comedy kind of thing then I would write something like this:

    When an elderly millionaire dies, his estranged(or *bickering*) children and their families are forced to take a road trip together across the country to retrieve their father?s inheritance.

    It creates a sense of conflict/tension and show there?s potential for funny moments.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2014In: Public

    A disgraced scientist sends a message into a blackhole, never expecting the terrifying message it sends back, now he has just days to prove to the world that this time he is right.

    Peter Nguyen Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 30, 2014 at 5:38 pm

    I must say this is a really good premise! I feel the logline does the job in enticing the reader. I?ve read a lot of these loglines on this site and this is the only one that got me hooked. So congrats and I hope your script is as good or even better than the logline.

    I must say this is a really good premise! I feel the logline does the job in enticing the reader. I?ve read a lot of these loglines on this site and this is the only one that got me hooked. So congrats and I hope your script is as good or even better than the logline.

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