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When a submissive guy, working for the mafia, is caught by the police he must help them to put the mafia behind bars to get the girl he really wants.
Hi, good logline, I only have one question about it. Is his goal to get "the girl he really wants" or is his goal to not be a submissive guy any more? Maybe to not work for the mafia anymore/to be free? If the goal isn't to get the girl I think you could skip that part in the logline or write it difRead more
Hi, good logline, I only have one question about it.
Is his goal to get “the girl he really wants” or is his goal to not be a submissive guy any more?
Maybe to not work for the mafia anymore/to be free?
If the goal isn’t to get the girl I think you could skip that part in the logline or write it different somehow, because right now it is a bit confusing to throw in a girl as a positive stake in the end of the logline when we don’t understand why he gets her by putting the maffia behind bars.
Good luck!
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