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  1. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

    Phoenix
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 5:24 pm

    Maybe it's something to do with police force, law enforcement bodies, child trafficking ring, anti-trafficking NGO... out to punish the punisher.

    Maybe it’s something to do with police force, law enforcement bodies, child trafficking ring, anti-trafficking NGO… out to punish the punisher.

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

    Phoenix
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 12:38 pm

    I think the logline is well structured and it shows a lot of scope for the story, although I would possibly change the end section "his operation backfires." The first part really grabs my interest, then loses it with the ending.

    I think the logline is well structured and it shows a lot of scope for the story, although I would possibly change the end section “his operation backfires.” The first part really grabs my interest, then loses it with the ending.

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  3. Posted: August 7, 2012In: Public

    An Australian researcher, transforms her life, after meeting a Scottish SAS captain in London and making a commitment to meet him again in five years time, when he retires.

    Phoenix
    Added an answer on August 16, 2012 at 5:34 pm

    Holbrook99 thanks for the feedback.The appointment is the pivotal point for everything that happens; the obstacles and challenges part of the journey. cheers Phoenix

    Holbrook99 thanks for the feedback.The appointment is the pivotal point for everything that happens; the obstacles and challenges part of the journey.
    cheers Phoenix

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