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  1. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    A boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 1:01 pm

    Ok, let's reak this down. A boy?s confusing existence (Why is his existence confusing? Why does he believe that it is? Do others share his belief?) is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying (Is he at death?s door? ) to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

    Ok, let’s reak this down.

    A boy?s confusing existence (Why is his existence confusing? Why does he believe that it is? Do others share his belief?) is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying (Is he at death?s door? ) to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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  2. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    A boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 12:28 pm

    I was told not to mention the name of any character in the log line. I would suggest fixing an age for this person in question. I would also suggest making it a spiritual journey / quest. That is what it sounds like to me.

    I was told not to mention the name of any character in the log line. I would suggest fixing an age for this person in question. I would also suggest making it a spiritual journey / quest. That is what it sounds like to me.

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  3. Posted: January 25, 2014In: Public

    A boy’s confusing existence is spent with a group of his closest friends. Dying to understand his journey, he realizes where it started.

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    Added an answer on January 25, 2014 at 11:46 am

    Ok, explain the premise, please.

    Ok, explain the premise, please.

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