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  1. Posted: July 30, 2016In: Action

    Following a career-defining launch of a state of the art submarine, a high-ranking U. S. government official finds her life turned upside down after she learns that her estranged husband is hunting her.

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    Added an answer on August 1, 2016 at 5:56 am

    OK. Let me explain exactly what is going on. Trying to write a log line for this story is not easy for me. Liam Dunham (b. April 4, 1960; 56 yrs. old) is a former C. I. A. special agent who was assigned to the Middle East during the Afghan War (April 27, 1978 - Present). He is sent there from FebruaRead more

    OK. Let me explain exactly what is going on. Trying to write a log line for this story is not easy for me.

    Liam Dunham (b. April 4, 1960; 56 yrs. old) is a former C. I. A. special agent who was assigned to the Middle East during the Afghan War (April 27, 1978 – Present). He is sent there from February 15, 1989 – April 30, 1992 to monitor the Soviet withdraws in the area. However, he was not just collecting information for U. S. Intelligence. He became disillusioned with the C. I. A. and the United States, and joined Al-Qaeda, becoming a leading member.

    During a special joint operation with the F. B. I. and the N. I. C. a few years later, he is captured in the U. S.; and is presently serving his sentence at a Federal Prison.

    However, he was prematurely released in May of 2012.

    Upon his release, he plans to take revenge on those who sent him to prison. His first target is his ex-wife Dr. Samantha Ryan from the Department of Defense Psychological Operations Department.

    In the present day, Dr. Ryan and her son, Parker, have relocated. She is still working for the D. O. D. and he is attending a private college.

    It is also during this time, and because of the attacks on Tuesday September 11, 2001, that various world governments, through the United Nations, began a large-scale operation to fight against terrorism. The project involves the creation of two international organizations working in concert.

    The first organization is called the ?International Multiple Threat Alert Command? or ?I. M. T. A. C.?.

    The second is called the ?United Earth Defense? or ?U. E. D.?.

    Prior to the creation of this international organization, the United States, along with a few other countries, were already working on a TOP SECRET project called ?Leviathan?, which was meant to be a state of the art military submarine, which can also be used for scientific research.

    Now, because of her position within the Department of Defense, and a change of pace from everything that has happened, because of her husband, she decided to oversee personally how the crew and the international scientific community who will be working on the vessel get along together.

    Unfortunately, her ex-husband, who has been keeping track of her, has found out about all this; and plans to seek revenge against her, and those who sent him to prison by arranging to have a computer virus placed into the submarine.

    During the submarine trials, a technician inadvertently discovers a video message from Liam.

    As the crew try to find a way to save themselves and the submarine, they manage to send a weak message to the United States Government about what has been happening. The government discovers that Liam Dunham, with the help of Al-Qaeda, is behind the cyber attack.

    Now, an international manhunt is underway to stop Dunham and prevent an international incident that has not been seen since 911.

    Therefore, I ask you these questions. Will Liam Dunham be stopped? Will an international incident be prevented before all hell breaks loose? Can a log line be created from all this?

    These and other questions will be answered on the next episode of ?As The Ocean Churns?.

    Thank you.

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  2. Posted: July 30, 2016In: Public

    When they cry to the Lord because of oppressors, he will send them a savior, and will defend and deliver them.

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    Added an answer on July 31, 2016 at 1:36 pm

    It is from the following - Isaiah 19:20 New Revised Standard Version, Anglicised Catholic Edition (NRSVACE) 20?It will be a sign and a witness to the Lord of hosts in the land of Egypt; when they cry to the Lord because of oppressors, he will send them a saviour, and will defend and deliver them. IRead more

    It is from the following –

    Isaiah 19:20

    New Revised Standard Version, Anglicised Catholic Edition (NRSVACE)

    20?It will be a sign and a witness to the Lord of hosts in the land of Egypt; when they cry to the Lord because of oppressors, he will send them a saviour, and will defend and deliver them.

    I was not sure what to specifically use as a log line.

    In this case, “they” would be “the Jews” however, to a larger extent, it would be all of humanity.

    The “”saviour” is obviously Jesus.

    The “oppressors” are those people, places, and things opressing humanity. Just think about what you have been hearing on the news lately.

    I am not just planning on a retelling of Jesus. What I have in mind has never been done the way that I intend to do it. It is a full gospel story.

    As far as who is telling the story, it is from the point of view of the narrator –

    Seeing that many others have undertaken to draw up accounts of the events that have reached their fulfillment among us, as these were handed down to us by those who from the outset were eyewitnesses and ministers of the word, I in my turn, after carefully going over the whole story from the beginning, have decided to write an ordered account for you, Theophilus, so that your Excellency may learn how well founded the teaching is that you have received. – Prologue I (Luke 1:1-4)

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  3. Posted: March 6, 2016In: Action

    While working under cover on a state-of-the-art submarine, a United States government agent learns that her former husband intends to ?terminate her with extreme prejudice?.

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    Added an answer on March 26, 2016 at 12:40 pm

    Does anybody else have any further comments?

    Does anybody else have any further comments?

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