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When a clown fish is kidnapped, an overprotective single father embarks on a dangerous adventure through the foreign ocean to reunite with him.
Not the best logline, this is IMDB's logline for Finding Nemo:?After his son is captured in the Great Barrier Reef and taken to Sydney, a timid clownfish sets out on a journey to bring him home.
Not the best logline, this is IMDB’s logline for Finding Nemo:?After his son is captured in the Great Barrier Reef and taken to Sydney, a timid clownfish sets out on a journey to bring him home.
See lessWhen his wife disappears and society accuses him of being a murderer, he finds tracks that she deliberately left behind. He fights against the media and the police to frame his wife.
I know this is your logline for an already produced movie from a published novel but this gives no clear indication of who the main character is, other than the MC is male. Why is he trying to frame his wife, surely he wants to find his wife? This makes no sense.
I know this is your logline for an already produced movie from a published novel but this gives no clear indication of who the main character is, other than the MC is male. Why is he trying to frame his wife, surely he wants to find his wife? This makes no sense.
See lessTrish Humphries a self-absorbed news reporter who just moved to New York finally gets her own talk show. She thinks it’s in a big network, but it’s really just public access. Now she has to learn how to work with her new team and balance her open relationship with her three boyfriends while pursuing her dream to be famous.
At 59 words, its too long for a logline. A logline has to be under 50 words and if its under 25 words thats much better. Unless you are writing a biopic about a public figure, don't put your character name in the logline. The fact that she has just moved and the MCs perception of big network but actRead more
At 59 words, its too long for a logline. A logline has to be under 50 words and if its under 25 words thats much better.
Unless you are writing a biopic about a public figure, don’t put your character name in the logline. The fact that she has just moved and the MCs perception of big network but actually its public access, and the three boyfriends, are unnecessary. The logline is to hook us, make us want to watch, give us what is unique about your story, give us the tone, genre of the story and the journey we are about to go on.
I can’t work out what is unique about your story, or why I’d want to watch.
Is this for TV or a movie?
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