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Story of Catholic clergyman Nicolaus Copernicus who solves the puzzle of the solar system & the Lutheran Mathematics professor who convinces Copernicus to publish.
I have another logline for this. Don't know if its better, it mentions the Reformation but it doesn't make the conflict, church vs science because that's not a conflict at the time. I won't write a story that helps propagate a myth that he was a heretic in his lifetime when he was invited on to PapaRead more
I have another logline for this. Don’t know if its better, it mentions the Reformation but it doesn’t make the conflict, church vs science because that’s not a conflict at the time. I won’t write a story that helps propagate a myth that he was a heretic in his lifetime when he was invited on to Papal committee’s to reform the calendar.
Anyway, logline:
In the days when questioning the church was heresy, a Catholic clergyman Nicolaus Copernicus challenges Earth’s place at the centre of the Universe but is afraid to publish until a Protestant Mathematics Professor convinces the ageing astronomer.
See lessWhen a survivor of a train crash disrupts her life, a young woman must overcome her circle?s hostility and cope with the abortion she denied for ten years
Let the reader work out whether it is dramatic or not. Can you describe the woman with something other than young? What life does she seek? What causes her to change path? What forces her to deal with the anguish? What is her anguish?
Let the reader work out whether it is dramatic or not.
Can you describe the woman with something other than young? What life does she seek? What causes her to change path? What forces her to deal with the anguish? What is her anguish?
See lessAfter he is ‘killed’ by a female undercover cop, an innocent man is ‘saved’ by a female bounty hunter who hallucinates slices of the future and must collect thr bounty on his future badass self.
Whilst this is almost a carbon copy of your previous logline. Simplify this down. Get rid of the killed and saved in quotation marks, it confuses the reader. This might have elements similar to Memento i.e. the time slice flashes similar to memory flashes/post-it notes: "A man, suffering from short-Read more
Whilst this is almost a carbon copy of your previous logline.
Simplify this down. Get rid of the killed and saved in quotation marks, it confuses the reader.
This might have elements similar to Memento i.e. the time slice flashes similar to memory flashes/post-it notes: “A man, suffering from short-term memory loss, uses notes and tattoos to hunt for the man he thinks killed his wife.”
Find other films, TV shows that are similar and find their loglines and use those loglines as a guide to write yours.
It should clearly mention the protagonist, the antagonist, the goal, the stakes and do so in a way that hooks us and want to read.
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