1. Posted: September 24, 2015In:

    When an astronaut learns that his fianc?e is sent on a space trip at near-lightspeed, he must find her before their age difference prevents them from ever having a family together.

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    priggy Logliner

    Love it. Very clear, who the protagonist is, goal and the stakes. I'd watch.

    Love it. Very clear, who the protagonist is, goal and the stakes. I’d watch.

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  2. Posted: September 25, 2015In:

    What would you do if a fortune teller had been right on the money six days stright; would you bet everything on the seventh days prediction… even the life of your new wife?

    priggy Logliner

    This is more of a tagline than a logline. A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.

    This is more of a tagline than a logline.

    A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.

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  3. Posted: September 28, 2015In: ,

    A man awaits the arrival of a violent time-travelling version of himself from 10 years in the future. After he is ‘killed’ by a female undercover cop determined to stop him from breaking bar, he is ‘saved’ by a female bounty hunter who hallucinates slices of the future and is determined to collect the bounty on his badass future self.

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    priggy Logliner

    How does a man await the arrival of his time-travelling future self? Surely, the present version doesn't know when to expect his future-self because the present version doesn't know anything about the future version.

    How does a man await the arrival of his time-travelling future self? Surely, the present version doesn’t know when to expect his future-self because the present version doesn’t know anything about the future version.

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