From reading your replies to the reviews, I figure this is kind of Jason Bourne meets Dogma meets Constantine.

First, I would correctly spell amnesiac – people might wonder if amnesic is a different thing altogether or whether you mean anaemic.

My problem with the logline is that surely once you lose your memory, your already on a journey to self-discovery as you don’t know who you are, where you live, what you do etc. Yet the logline hints that the only reason she cares about finding out who she is, is because of the demons attacking her.

This is the logline for the Bourne Identity: “A man with amnesia discovers he is a governmental assassin who has been targeted for death by the organization that employs him.”

Also on whether, its a movie, a TV show or a Comic book, it depends how much story, you have. Is what you have the now, essentially the story with no place to really go then its a movie. If what you have is basically a launch for more stories to come then its a TV show or a Comic book. And if you want, you can use a Comic book to secure a TV show – that’s what Dark Matter creators Joseph Mallozzi & Paul Mullie did. They had this idea for a TV show when they were writing for Stargate SG-1/Atlantis/Universe and then when they saw even the creators of Stargate were finding it difficult to get more TV work, they decided to write Dark matter as a comic book as a sort of proof of concept and then take it to network execs.