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  1. Posted: November 14, 2012In: Public

    To distance himself from overbearing parents, high school freshman Michael Colantino finds himself compelled to create thoughtful hip-hop music in a world that overwhelmed with flashy and uninspired artists. Michael's friend Harry seeks help dealing with a dishonest truck driver.

    RalphVito
    Added an answer on November 16, 2012 at 12:08 am

    Agreed, after some thought I'm losing the hip-hop angle and have came up with following logline for the series: "Freshmen at Chauncey Vocation High School Frank, Harry and Danny are a group of kindhearted degenerates learning to deal with life in high school." What do you think?

    Agreed, after some thought I’m losing the hip-hop angle and have came up with following logline for the series:
    “Freshmen at Chauncey Vocation High School Frank, Harry and Danny are a group of kindhearted degenerates learning to deal with life in high school.”
    What do you think?

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  2. Posted: November 14, 2012In: Public

    To distance himself from overbearing parents, high school freshman Michael Colantino finds himself compelled to create thoughtful hip-hop music in a world that overwhelmed with flashy and uninspired artists. Michael's friend Harry seeks help dealing with a dishonest truck driver.

    RalphVito
    Added an answer on November 16, 2012 at 12:05 am

    Agreed, thanks for your input.

    Agreed, thanks for your input.

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  3. Posted: November 14, 2012In: Public

    To distance himself from overbearing parents, high school freshman Michael Colantino finds himself compelled to create thoughtful hip-hop music in a world that overwhelmed with flashy and uninspired artists. Michael's friend Harry seeks help dealing with a dishonest truck driver.

    RalphVito
    Added an answer on November 16, 2012 at 12:02 am

    Thanks for your response! I agree that it sounds much better split up. My original thought was that I wanted to create a feel for a series in the logline of the pilot, but I see now that is not what is best. Also, after much thought I'm going to ditch the hip-hop angle and maybe just make it a runniRead more

    Thanks for your response! I agree that it sounds much better split up. My original thought was that I wanted to create a feel for a series in the logline of the pilot, but I see now that is not what is best.

    Also, after much thought I’m going to ditch the hip-hop angle and maybe just make it a running side story.
    I have came up with the following series logline:
    “Freshmen at Chauncey Vocation High School Frank, Harry and Danny are a group of kindhearted degenerates learning to deal with life in high school”

    What do you think?

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