1. Posted: January 28, 2013In:

    After he kills his loving girlfriend while intoxicated, a teenager and his best friend turn their picture-perfect road trip into a fool-proof plan to dispose of the body, as they narrowly elude several close encounters with the police.

    ravenguy

    I think it gets a little too wordy. If I read that in the TV guide I'd pass because it's a lot to digest. I also wouldn't watch this based on the protagonist being a criminal of the worst sort. I really don't want to watch a story that's not based on a true one about covering a crime with body dispoRead more

    I think it gets a little too wordy. If I read that in the TV guide I’d pass because it’s a lot to digest. I also wouldn’t watch this based on the protagonist being a criminal of the worst sort. I really don’t want to watch a story that’s not based on a true one about covering a crime with body disposal. The first thing that came to my mind is not wanting to see them succeed, but for the police to catch them so her family can get some closure and he can get punished.

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  2. Posted: January 30, 2013In:

    "Enemy at the Gates" meets spaghetti western.

    ravenguy

    Interesting, but I don't think Enemy at the Gates was popular enough to make most people connect what you are trying to say. Also the logline doesn't imply the conflict concretely for me, there are dozens of directions you could go with that combo as opposed to the Soviet-Finnish war meets the "GoodRead more

    Interesting, but I don’t think Enemy at the Gates was popular enough to make most people connect what you are trying to say. Also the logline doesn’t imply the conflict concretely for me, there are dozens of directions you could go with that combo as opposed to the Soviet-Finnish war meets the “Good, the Bad and the Ugly”. Then I would picture a winter war with three characters going awol to pursue a mutual goal. Hope this helps.

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