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Four friends with troubled pasts aquire stolen SWAT uniforms to raid drug houses. They are in over their heads with the local druglord when the cop who supplied the uniforms turns on them.
Some exciting elements hinted at there bu the logline is very unclear as to intentions and some other aspects. My first question is are they raiding drug houses to rob the dealers and profit themselves, or is it some kind of misguided attempt at amateur law enforcement? From your attempted logline,Read more
Some exciting elements hinted at there bu the logline is very unclear as to intentions and some other aspects.
My first question is are they raiding drug houses to rob the dealers and profit themselves, or is it some kind of misguided attempt at amateur law enforcement? From your attempted logline, it’s totally unclear.
The second sentence is more of a plot point than something that should be in a logline. If you have written a script behind this, then you should know your story a lot better than that logline indicates.
Also, unless you have written a multi-protagonist structured script, your logline should be talking about your main character.
See lessWhile appraising old and rare books at a restored colonial plantation, a book collector stumbles across a series of diaries that chronicle an alien visitation in 1781.
Very cool idea, but the others are right that it doesn't have the essential conflict yet. If this he has is this (what's in the logline) there are a whole lot of ways he could go with it. The next thing to think of is why/how would this discovery cause conflict for the protagonist (assuming he is thRead more
Very cool idea, but the others are right that it doesn’t have the essential conflict yet. If this he has is this (what’s in the logline) there are a whole lot of ways he could go with it.
The next thing to think of is why/how would this discovery cause conflict for the protagonist (assuming he is the book collector) and what is his main goal in the story.
See lessVibrant animals, big and small roamed over the grey world of Land, Sea and air, however time is running out.
Yep, this isn't a logline at all, sorry. Even if this were not going to be a human story and instead would be an abstract animal-story based thing, usually the animal characters would still be given human qualities of some kind so that their perspective makes sense to humans... usually, anyway. ThisRead more
Yep, this isn’t a logline at all, sorry. Even if this were not going to be a human story and instead would be an abstract animal-story based thing, usually the animal characters would still be given human qualities of some kind so that their perspective makes sense to humans… usually, anyway.
This is a setting you posted, not a logline for a story.
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