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In a world with real monsters, a desperate griffin and his team fight through the expanding zombie horde to deliver an immune human to their superiors.
How about A desperate griffin and his team of monsters must fight through a horde of zombies to capture the only thing that will return his family?s honor, an immune human.? From what you said above, it seems like loyalty and honor is what really matters to the griffin. Finding and retrieving an immRead more
How about A desperate griffin and his team of monsters must fight through a horde of zombies to capture the only thing that will return his family?s honor, an immune human.?
From what you said above, it seems like loyalty and honor is what really matters to the griffin. Finding and retrieving an immune human is just a tool to get back what was lost. Just throwing out ideas.
See lessIn a world with real monsters, a desperate griffin and his team fight through the expanding zombie horde to deliver an immune human to their superiors.
This was really a tough one. I feel like there's a piece missing. I agree with nicholasandrewhalls and would dump the "in a world" part but I'd also dump the "superiors" both of these will come out in the sp, especially if the superiors eat the human in a twist ending. I'd also think twice about theRead more
This was really a tough one. I feel like there’s a piece missing. I agree with nicholasandrewhalls and would dump the “in a world” part but I’d also dump the “superiors” both of these will come out in the sp, especially if the superiors eat the human in a twist ending.
I’d also think twice about the zombies and maybe make them infected humans or half-breeds so that the rescued creature would be a pure-blood human. Uninfected vs immune. Immune means the human can’t be infected, so why does he have to be saved? Uninfected has more risk, more danger and more urgency.
“A desperate griffin and his team of monsters must fight through a horde of zombies to save an uninfected human for the Council of Blood.”
That’s the best I can do without knowing why. I’m assuming the griffin is the good guy and would be under the impression that he is saving the human and not delivering him. Good Luck.
See lessAfter waking up human, the former Angel of Darkness recruits a supernatural team to steal Pandora's Box from Lucifer.
"A young boy recruits a supernatural team to help him steal Pandora's Box from Lucifer and return him to his true form, the Angel of Darkness." The waking up human part I'd leave out. I don't know how old your main character is but I put in young boy anyway. I'm assuming the former Angel of DarknessRead more
“A young boy recruits a supernatural team to help him steal Pandora’s Box from Lucifer and return him to his true form, the Angel of Darkness.”
The waking up human part I’d leave out. I don’t know how old your main character is but I put in young boy anyway. I’m assuming the former Angel of Darkness doesn’t want to be human, the only way to get back is to steal Pandora’s box and he has to find help because, well, he’s human.
You covered everything, just had it in the wrong order. That’s what I see, anyways. Good Luck
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