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  1. Posted: August 29, 2015In: Public

    When new clues from the diary of her long lost brother, help a young woman to solve a riddle of decades old crime, she is compelled to go to Siberia in search for her vanished family and a missing treasure.

    rkeller Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 31, 2015 at 5:31 am

    Perhaps tighten a bit? After a daughter uncovers her dead brother's diary, she scrambles from Brazil to Siberia searching for her family and her birthright fortune.

    Perhaps tighten a bit?

    After a daughter uncovers her dead brother’s diary, she scrambles from Brazil to Siberia searching for her family and her birthright fortune.

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2015In: Public

    In a dystopian world, a geeky geneticist invents a super-seed to avert global starvation and finds himself pursued by dark corporate profiteers.

    rkeller Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 31, 2015 at 5:23 am

    What about changing the generic "dark corporate profiteers" to a single antagonist or cabal?

    What about changing the generic “dark corporate profiteers” to a single antagonist or cabal?

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  3. Posted: August 29, 2015In: Examples

    When an escaped Muslim militant surfaces in Hamburg to claim an inheritance, a German intelligence agent uses him to trap a well-regarded Muslim scholar suspected of financing terrorists.

    rkeller Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 31, 2015 at 5:11 am

    Just a thought... A crusty German intelligence agent scrambles to determine if a half-Checan, half-Russian Muslim is a victim seeking refuge or a terrorist seeking revenge.

    Just a thought…

    A crusty German intelligence agent scrambles to determine if a half-Checan, half-Russian Muslim is a victim seeking refuge or a terrorist seeking revenge.

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