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  1. Posted: September 21, 2014In: Public

    After becoming a cyborg and inheriting the memories of others before, a human man enlists the aid of an alien cyborg intelligence to prevent the extinction of the human race.

    Robert_S
    Added an answer on October 3, 2014 at 8:04 am

    No, the threat is internal. The instincts and characteristics that helped humans survive to become the dominant species (competition, dominance, acquisition, etc) are now the very things that will bring it to its end by its own hands. But the others are right. I need to be more specific on the threaRead more

    No, the threat is internal. The instincts and characteristics that helped humans survive to become the dominant species (competition, dominance, acquisition, etc) are now the very things that will bring it to its end by its own hands. But the others are right. I need to be more specific on the threat.

    In this story world, the event is a common one. All the races in the galaxy experience a global nuclear war but less than 1% survive and the human race will not be one of the survivors unless the two mains do something.

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  2. Posted: September 21, 2014In: Public

    After becoming a cyborg and inheriting the memories of others before, a human man enlists the aid of an alien cyborg intelligence to prevent the extinction of the human race.

    Robert_S
    Added an answer on September 21, 2014 at 2:37 am

    My first attempt was met with largely one repeated question: why didn't the alien confederacy leverage the tech for themselves. Since it's backstory to be released piecemeal, I'll list it outside of the logline: 1. They (the alien confederacy) doesn't control the tech. The alien intellect in the logRead more

    My first attempt was met with largely one repeated question: why didn’t the alien confederacy leverage the tech for themselves. Since it’s backstory to be released piecemeal, I’ll list it outside of the logline:

    1. They (the alien confederacy) doesn’t control the tech. The alien intellect in the logline controls it and hasn’t released it.
    2. It cost tens of thousands of lives before the first Ro’shaan was finally created by the race that did create it(a race now long dead). Laws being as they are, deaths caused by medical/technological research are subject to criminal prosecution.
    3. There was a convert operation to recreate the tech among the confederacy and while they were successful at recreating it, they failed to contain it, leading to a war. All research and development in to this tech has since been declared forbidden(along with time travel and a few other tech developments) and they are thankful that the pair that does exist is peaceful (for the most part).

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  3. Posted: September 21, 2014In: Public

    After becoming a cyborg and inheriting the memories of others before, a human man enlists the aid of an alien cyborg intelligence to prevent the extinction of the human race.

    Robert_S
    Added an answer on September 21, 2014 at 2:37 am

    My first attempt was met with largely one repeated question: why didn't the alien confederacy leverage the tech for themselves. Since it's backstory to be released piecemeal, I'll list it outside of the logline: 1. They (the alien confederacy) doesn't control the tech. The alien intellect in the logRead more

    My first attempt was met with largely one repeated question: why didn’t the alien confederacy leverage the tech for themselves. Since it’s backstory to be released piecemeal, I’ll list it outside of the logline:

    1. They (the alien confederacy) doesn’t control the tech. The alien intellect in the logline controls it and hasn’t released it.
    2. It cost tens of thousands of lives before the first Ro’shaan was finally created by the race that did create it(a race now long dead). Laws being as they are, deaths caused by medical/technological research are subject to criminal prosecution.
    3. There was a convert operation to recreate the tech among the confederacy and while they were successful at recreating it, they failed to contain it, leading to a war. All research and development in to this tech has since been declared forbidden(along with time travel and a few other tech developments) and they are thankful that the pair that does exist is peaceful (for the most part).

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