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  1. Posted: September 18, 2017In: Drama

    When an orphaned dropout joins an off-grid commune to evade a hometown scandal, but secretly returns to claim an inheritance, he must fight off reporters and protestors who follow him and destroy his commune, which he must rebuild with his windfall.

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    Added an answer on September 19, 2017 at 12:41 pm

    Yes, rebuilding the commune is the story, and rest is the back story, but I am still having trouble making it interesting and inserting irony.

    Yes, rebuilding the commune is the story, and rest is the back story, but I am still having trouble making it interesting and inserting irony.

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2017In: Drama

    When allegations prompt a rising Senior to permanently leave home, he must feign loyalty to a commune that hides him so he can attain residency there and take his GED.

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    Added an answer on September 7, 2017 at 2:52 am

    This is the problem with squeezing too much info. He runs away because he was named a key suspect but was later proved innocent, after he left, but his adopted grandparents didn't survive so he's orphaned. He can't and won't return and is now focused on getting his GED so he can get on with his lifeRead more

    This is the problem with squeezing too much info. He runs away because he was named a key suspect but was later proved innocent, after he left, but his adopted grandparents didn’t survive so he’s orphaned. He can’t and won’t return and is now focused on getting his GED so he can get on with his life and go to college.

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  3. Posted: November 30, 2016In: Noir

    A domesticated soldier must rekindle her killer instinct by a suicidal Drill Sergeant in order to assassinate her drug trafficking ex-husband before he’s elected President.

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    Added an answer on August 28, 2017 at 2:32 pm

    It sounds intriguing, but too much information. If you could only describe each person with one adjective describing good, moderate, or bad behavior , how would you do this? This is a good excercise to get at the core of power dynamics.

    It sounds intriguing, but too much information. If you could only describe each person with one adjective describing good, moderate, or bad behavior , how would you do this? This is a good excercise to get at the core of power dynamics.

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