That is a another brilliant story as well. I was too vague in my first description so bare with me I’m new at this. The opening scene begins with the protagonist getting “the” phone call resulting in a shut down of the company unless they give him something worth selling. The next day all four members of the team sit and dispute about the future of their company. All the sudden in walks a man (in all black) offering to sell the guys exactly what they need to continue. He tells the guys he has an application that will change the world. He explains how it works and what it does but no one believes him until he uses one of the four guys as an example. We’ll say the guy who takes part in the example his name is Brad. Brad puts his fingerprint on the tablet (ipad, kindle fire, etc) and the app opens, we are pulled into this world where we see Brad as an old man lying on his death bed surrounded by his family as he dies. The guys are instantly blown away. They’re all on board but want to have a night to think it over. They meet up at a bar and decide if they want to go through with this that they all need to experience the app. They do and that’s when things get crazy, in the end they need to decide whether its worth making money in order to let people discover how they die or abolish this idea all together.

It still needs a lot of work but i hope that clarifies what I’m going for.