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Twenty-year-old vindictive Johnny leaves the reform school, forms a one man army with nature's creatures, and avenges his parents' assassins, the last one being the head of state with impregnable security.
You don't need to include your protag's name. Unless the protag is a famous person, character names are meaningless and tend to clutter the logline. Better to use a descriptive noun and a well-chosen adjective. This will make the character clearer and the logline more succinct: "A rebellious juvenilRead more
You don’t need to include your protag’s name. Unless the protag is a famous person, character names are meaningless and tend to clutter the logline.
Better to use a descriptive noun and a well-chosen adjective. This will make the character clearer and the logline more succinct:
“A rebellious juvenile delinquent forms a one man army with nature’s creatures to avenge his parents death at the hands of corrupt assassins, one of whom is a head of state with impregnable security.”
See lessTwenty-year-old vindictive Johnny leaves the reform school, forms a one man army with nature's creatures, and avenges his parents' assassins, the last one being the head of state with impregnable security.
You don't need to include your protag's name. Unless the protag is a famous person, character names are meaningless and tend to clutter the logline. Better to use a descriptive noun and a well-chosen adjective. This will make the character clearer and the logline more succinct: "A rebellious juvenilRead more
You don’t need to include your protag’s name. Unless the protag is a famous person, character names are meaningless and tend to clutter the logline.
Better to use a descriptive noun and a well-chosen adjective. This will make the character clearer and the logline more succinct:
“A rebellious juvenile delinquent forms a one man army with nature’s creatures to avenge his parents death at the hands of corrupt assassins, one of whom is a head of state with impregnable security.”
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Thanks for the great feedback jm
Thanks for the great feedback jm
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