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  1. Posted: May 1, 2015In: Public

    ?When an inexperienced journalist gets assigned to a military unit fighting in the second US civil war, he will have to fill the unlikely role of diplomat in order to prevent the war from reaching his home town.?

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    Added an answer on May 2, 2015 at 11:42 am

    I love the setting for this plot concept. I also like the questions that a setting like this raises and how it effect the goal of the protag.

    I love the setting for this plot concept. I also like the questions that a setting like this raises and how it effect the goal of the protag.

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  2. Posted: May 2, 2015In: Public

    After she finds divorce papers, a desperate make-up artist goes to extreme measures to turn herself into her husbands ideal woman, but when she discovers that he actually dreams of becoming a woman she has to face what is really keeping them together.

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    Added an answer on May 2, 2015 at 11:27 am

    There isn't any thing wrong with a add inciting incident in my opinion, but the second answers the reason for the first, so I think it reveals too much. However, I think it is well written and arranged.

    There isn’t any thing wrong with a add inciting incident in my opinion, but the second answers the reason for the first, so I think it reveals too much. However, I think it is well written and arranged.

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2015In: Public

    Rudderless since returning from the Gulf, a sardonic veteran's hapless life gets a bump when he befriends a youth in need of a mentor, but in order to save his budding relationship with his young protege's mom he must shed his old skin and become the man everyone, including himself, needs him to be.

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    Added an answer on May 2, 2015 at 11:21 am

    This is my logline for a script I just finished. I submitted this logline with the script for this years Nichols Fellowship contest. It's a very funny comedy with a bit of rom com mixed in.

    This is my logline for a script I just finished. I submitted this logline with the script for this years Nichols Fellowship contest. It’s a very funny comedy with a bit of rom com mixed in.

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