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A young martial artist must find his uncle and request his help in fighting his father, a martial arts master who is determined to kill him.
Not bad. The only question I have - although I don't know if it really must be answered in the logline - is why does the father want to kill his son?
Not bad. The only question I have – although I don’t know if it really must be answered in the logline – is why does the father want to kill his son?
See lessA hard-boiled bank auditor struggles to outwit a colleague and onetime master thief bent on sinking the bank for perceived negligence that wrongfully landed him in jail.
In this logline you have a protag and an antag. But for me it's hard to figure out who's? "really"the bad guy here. I don't feel it's 'good' against 'evil'. Also??if the hard-boiled bank auditor?is the protag, you're burying the lead. You should not end with describing what happened to the antag. BuRead more
In this logline you have a protag and an antag. But for me it’s hard to figure out who’s? “really”the bad guy here. I don’t feel it’s ‘good’ against ‘evil’. Also??if the hard-boiled bank auditor?is the protag, you’re burying the lead. You should not end with describing what happened to the antag. But I guess all elements the logline needs are in there, just not in the right order.
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My take:After Hannibal becomes the soul judge of Celebrity MasterChef,?Clarice? has to cook for life or be eliminated.?? https://www.flickr.com/photos/bovinemagnet/14620439267
My take:
After Hannibal becomes the soul judge of Celebrity MasterChef,?Clarice? has to cook for life or be eliminated.?? https://www.flickr.com/photos/bovinemagnet/14620439267
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