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  1. Posted: October 25, 2015In: Drama

    When the daughter of a corrupt Mexican police chef of Iguala is kidnapped, he goes om a murderous rampage while unwillingly helped by a masked female vigilante who brutally revenges the endless killings of Mexican favela girls.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2015 at 12:40 am

    Tanks FFF, maybe she has to kill her father. Good idea. Will take a lot of wok to clean up this logline.

    Tanks FFF, maybe she has to kill her father. Good idea. Will take a lot of wok to clean up this logline.

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  2. Posted: October 25, 2015In: Drama

    When the daughter of a corrupt Mexican police chef of Iguala is kidnapped, he goes om a murderous rampage while unwillingly helped by a masked female vigilante who brutally revenges the endless killings of Mexican favela girls.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on October 26, 2015 at 3:50 am

    "..killing whom, though? And why? " The other corrupt cobs (in Iguala 99% of the cobs) and the crime syndicates who kidnap favela girls, force them into prostitution and afterward kill them - without exception. With a bit of fantasy you already know his daughter staged her own kidnapping. This afterRead more

    “..killing whom, though? And why? ”

    The other corrupt cobs (in Iguala 99% of the cobs) and the crime syndicates who kidnap favela girls, force them into prostitution and afterward kill them – without exception. With a bit of fantasy you already know his daughter staged her own kidnapping. This after her father rapes and kills heir favela house made and blames – who happens to be the troubled daughters (she gets beaten by her father when he’s drunk) only friend.?A beggar is blamed for the murder..

    Whatthe police chief does not know?is that his daughter witnessed his crime. And after she finds papers that link her father to at least 200 murders of favala girls in Iguala, the last 5 years, she is going to take justice into her own hands.

    But I know the logline still sucks and I’m not quite sure who the antagonist and the protagonist should be. If he’s the antagonist, she (his daughter) is the protagonist. But in this logline I should put her in its first part. Don’t know how to do that.? And how to say tht the masked female vigilante is the kidnapped daughter.

    http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-3239700/Thrown-bridges-horrifically-mutilated-raped-simply-disappeared-Inside-Mexican-state-900-women-vanished-murdered-1-200-raped-single-year.html

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