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A hard-boiled bank auditor struggles to outwit a colleague and onetime master thief bent on sinking the bank for perceived negligence that wrongfully landed him in jail.
In this logline you have a protag and an antag. But for me it's hard to figure out who's? "really"the bad guy here. I don't feel it's 'good' against 'evil'. Also??if the hard-boiled bank auditor?is the protag, you're burying the lead. You should not end with describing what happened to the antag. BuRead more
In this logline you have a protag and an antag. But for me it’s hard to figure out who’s? “really”the bad guy here. I don’t feel it’s ‘good’ against ‘evil’. Also??if the hard-boiled bank auditor?is the protag, you’re burying the lead. You should not end with describing what happened to the antag. But I guess all elements the logline needs are in there, just not in the right order.
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Not a bad idea, my writer just worked out??a simular idea/logline of mine into a screenplay. Give me the same thing, only different. ha-ha We will see a lot of these sort ?ideas fast. It's the time for it. Best article I found this year: http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/6-secrets-to-creatiRead more
Not a bad idea, my writer just worked out??a simular idea/logline of mine into a screenplay. Give me the same thing, only different. ha-ha
We will see a lot of these sort ?ideas fast. It’s the time for it. Best article I found this year: http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/6-secrets-to-creating-and-sustaining-suspense
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My take:After Hannibal becomes the soul judge of Celebrity MasterChef,?Clarice? has to cook for life or be eliminated.?? https://www.flickr.com/photos/bovinemagnet/14620439267
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After Hannibal becomes the soul judge of Celebrity MasterChef,?Clarice? has to cook for life or be eliminated.?? https://www.flickr.com/photos/bovinemagnet/14620439267
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