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A workaholic founder of a super-successful start-up, who’s reluctantly taken up a 70-year-old as an intern, must decide whether to hire an external CEO in her stead, when faced with overwhelming work-life balance pressures.
Hi Mike, Thank you so much for the detailed responses to two of my loglines. You have given me so much food for thought. Immense gratitude for the same. And I apologize for the delay in my revert. I will rework this basis your inputs and repost. Thank you once again Saurin
Hi Mike,
Thank you so much for the detailed responses to two of my loglines. You have given me so much food for thought. Immense gratitude for the same.
And I apologize for the delay in my revert. I will rework this basis your inputs and repost.
Thank you once again
Saurin
See lessA music teacher has a fatal accident, just as he was to achieve his dream of playing jazz professionally, and lands in the ‘Great Before’, from where he desperately tries to find his way back to his body.
Thank you, Odie, for your review and your inputs. I was unaware that multiple commas are frowned upon in loglines. Here's a slightly revised version: A music teacher who is about to achieve his dream of playing jazz professionally has a fatal accident and lands in the ‘Great Before’ from where he deRead more
Thank you, Odie, for your review and your inputs. I was unaware that multiple commas are frowned upon in loglines.
Here’s a slightly revised version: A music teacher who is about to achieve his dream of playing jazz professionally has a fatal accident and lands in the ‘Great Before’ from where he desperately tries to find his way back to his body.
Regards
See lessAfter an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a spineless director must fight his demonic spouse to save the cast and crew.
When an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a faithless director must conduct an exorcism to save his wife, the cast, and himself. (31 words) I've tried to combine the two loglines (forgive me if I know not what I do :) 'Faithless' rang better in myRead more
When an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a faithless director must conduct an exorcism to save his wife, the cast, and himself.
(31 words)
I’ve tried to combine the two loglines (forgive me if I know not what I do 🙂
‘Faithless’ rang better in my ears. Also, by adding the cast and himself, I felt the stakes rise, for it could kill them too.
Thank you.
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