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  1. Posted: September 25, 2019In: SciFi

    After two job-seeking programmers accidentally install a greedy biotech corporation’s experimental software update to reality itself, they must exploit the resulting bugs to evade capture and fix the world.

    Scott Danzig Samurai
    Added an answer on September 25, 2019 at 1:45 am

    @mikepedley85 ...thanks for the comments... I always find suggestions here to be more and more explicit about things, and find the resulting loglines to be rather unwieldy.? Maybe this? In a world that few have realized is a computer simulation, a mischievous programmer naively installs a greedy corRead more

    Mike Pedley …thanks for the comments… I always find suggestions here to be more and more explicit about things, and find the resulting loglines to be rather unwieldy.? Maybe this?

    In a world that few have realized is a computer simulation, a mischievous programmer naively installs a greedy corporation’s experimental software update to their reality, and now must exploit the resulting bugs to evade capture and undo her mistake.

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  2. Posted: August 27, 2016In: Drama

    A dangerous serial killer is the only survivor in a plane crash, when she was transported to a different prison, she is rescued by tibetans from remote high mountain village. After being treated from her injuries she faces a choice to leave the village or to merry 7 brothers of a family who took care of her, according to their matriarchal tradition.

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    Added an answer on August 27, 2016 at 7:02 am

    You can probably take out the bit about the prison transport... seems superficial for the logline. ?You could even replace "serial killer" with "prisoner" if you want to convey that it's a prisoner. ?Serial killers are more attention-getting, so I'd leave prison out. Two questions come to mind: WhyRead more

    You can probably take out the bit about the prison transport… seems superficial for the logline. ?You could even replace “serial killer” with “prisoner” if you want to convey that it’s a prisoner. ?Serial killers are more attention-getting, so I’d leave prison out.

    Two questions come to mind:

    Why would the killer ever decide to stay? ?Why would she care about this tradition? ?You’re relying on a “matriarchy” to be hard to pass up?

    And … does the woman need to choose one? ?Or is it ALL 7?

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