1. Posted: October 5, 2019In:

    In order to progress through heaven’s gates,? ghosts must pay penance by returning to earth and helping the people they hurt.

    Scott Danzig Samurai

    There doesn't seem to be enough there to interest me... it's too generic and doesn't seem like too much of a challenge, especially for a ghost who probably can't be harmed.? The "facing people who might not like you" thing doesn't seem enough.? I'd try to make that seem more imposing of a goal.? LikRead more

    There doesn’t seem to be enough there to interest me… it’s too generic and doesn’t seem like too much of a challenge, especially for a ghost who probably can’t be harmed.? The “facing people who might not like you” thing doesn’t seem enough.? I’d try to make that seem more imposing of a goal.? Like maybe helping the widows of the people he murdered.? Still probably not getting into heaven after that though…

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  2. Posted: October 5, 2019In:

    A recently engaged vain sports star is forced to compete in a drag queen competition. After a wealthy psychopath out bids him on an auction record breaking painting by a famous outsider artist.

    Scott Danzig Samurai

    So the sports star doesn't like being dressed up like a drag queen I gather.? The psychopath is basically saying, "If you want your little painting, you gotta be a drag queen, buddy!" just because he likes humiliating people for fun?? I think the logline needs some hint of a reason why the *vain* spRead more

    So the sports star doesn’t like being dressed up like a drag queen I gather.? The psychopath is basically saying, “If you want your little painting, you gotta be a drag queen, buddy!” just because he likes humiliating people for fun?? I think the logline needs some hint of a reason why the *vain* sports star would endure that just for a painting.

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  3. Posted: October 5, 2019In:

    When her mother is brutally murdered, a family woman must find out who her mother was, in order to uncover what happened; but when a cult from her mother’s secret past starts to infiltrate her life , she must Mary and her family must escape indoctrination or risk becoming victims themselves.

    Scott Danzig Samurai

    I like it, but the only thing I have issues with... cults generally don't force people to join them do they?... they just make it very difficult to leave.? Or at least that's the case with scientology from what I've seen in documentaries.? But this could be a good ol' people-sacrificing demonic cultRead more

    I like it, but the only thing I have issues with… cults generally don’t force people to join them do they?… they just make it very difficult to leave.? Or at least that’s the case with scientology from what I’ve seen in documentaries.? But this could be a good ol’ people-sacrificing demonic cult… in which case you can probably have them escaping having their hearts ripped out.? I like the “uncovering the secret past” type of movie for sure.

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