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  1. Posted: April 4, 2021In: Thriller

    A young woman successfully flees from her stalker ex-boyfriend but, after he kills himself and leaves her his sizable estate, she must decide whether to take the money and risk the wrath of the man’s surviving family, who believe the money is rightfully theirs.

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    Replied to answer on April 8, 2021 at 3:48 pm

    Cheers appreciate it!

    Cheers appreciate it!

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2021In: Thriller

    A young woman successfully flees from her stalker ex-boyfriend but, after he kills himself and leaves her his sizable estate, she must decide whether to take the money and risk the wrath of the man’s surviving family, who believe the money is rightfully theirs.

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    Replied to answer on April 7, 2021 at 7:51 am

    Thanks for the feedback Richiev! I'm thinking that she rightfully feels that she's entitled to the money because of the pain and suffering he caused her but then is consumed by guilt after seeing his surviving children fall into poverty as a result. You would have a specific incident that embodies tRead more

    Thanks for the feedback Richiev! I’m thinking that she rightfully feels that she’s entitled to the money because of the pain and suffering he caused her but then is consumed by guilt after seeing his surviving children fall into poverty as a result. You would have a specific incident that embodies this and for which the protagonist feels residual guilt (the teenage child tries to steal a car and crashes it, killing an innocent bystander, etc). The ‘twist’ then becomes that the protagonist realises that her deceased ex did not leave her the money out of some misguided attempt at forgiveness but rather as an act of vengeance, where he knew that leaving her the money would push her into making a decision that she ultimately regretted and that would torment her, thus exacting his perceived revenge upon her. Maybe this is along the lines of the ‘extra thing’?

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  3. Posted: October 22, 2020In: Television

    When AI modelling is able to generate an image of someone’s ‘perfect match’ by scanning their brain, a married man must decide whether to secretly pursue a real-life woman that was mistakenly identified as his match by a social media algorithm when he shared his match image (Black Mirror Spec).

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    Replied to answer on October 28, 2020 at 7:00 am

    I just realised this might be better and more marketable from the woman's perspective, similar to The Invisible Man. "When AI modelling is able to generate an image of someone's 'perfect match' by scanning their brain, a young woman is mistakenly identified as the person shown in the perfect match bRead more

    I just realised this might be better and more marketable from the woman’s perspective, similar to The Invisible Man.

    “When AI modelling is able to generate an image of someone’s ‘perfect match’ by scanning their brain, a young woman is mistakenly identified as the person shown in the perfect match brain scan image of a married man by a social media algorithm when he shared the image online, putting her in grave danger when his obsession for her grows”.

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