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  1. Posted: August 8, 2013In: Public

    A lowly bartender planning her upcoming marriage has her Celebrity Free Pass, the one famous person she can sleep with without any consequences from her partner, walk into her bar, creating a world of problems for herself when she accepts his advances.

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    Added an answer on August 8, 2013 at 9:53 pm

    Hi thanks a lot for the response. Yeah it's lengthy because I thought I would have to briefly define the Free Pass and also that this was a celebrity already established to be her free pass. Additionally, part of the drama comes her trying to hide it from her fiancee initially, so she wouldn't immedRead more

    Hi thanks a lot for the response. Yeah it’s lengthy because I thought I would have to briefly define the Free Pass and also that this was a celebrity already established to be her free pass. Additionally, part of the drama comes her trying to hide it from her fiancee initially, so she wouldn’t immediately be honest about what is going on. Maybe, ‘An engaged bartender meets the man who is her Celebrity Free Pass but her life spirals out of control when she secretly accepts his advances’? Any ideas on this would be much appreciated. Thanks again..

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  2. Posted: March 11, 2013In: Public

    In a distant future ravaged by war, a secret society stages a fake alien invasion in order to unite the world's warring factions.

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2013 at 7:55 pm

    Thanks guys, yeah I wasn't exactly sure where to place the focus of the narrative so didn't yet write in a specific protagonist. I thought that it might be a good juxtaposition to follow both the powerful society and an ordinary soldier unknowingly caught up in their plans, so that we follow his orRead more

    Thanks guys, yeah I wasn’t exactly sure where to place the focus of the narrative so didn’t yet write in a specific protagonist. I thought that it might be a good juxtaposition to follow both the powerful society and an ordinary soldier unknowingly caught up in their plans, so that we follow his or her arc through the conflict. Kind of Alan Moore meets Generation Kill. There could be conflict in the society attempting to secretly have the primary attack be a kamikaze mission for those involved in order to better cover the society’s tracks. This could then produce conflict amongst those in the society, which could be made up of those who have genuine altruistic desires for the plan and those who want it pursued only to pacify populations so that their business interests in some geographic areas can continue unabated. In this scenario, it could not so much be a long-standing secret society but a more cobbled-together gathering of politicians, social thinkers and business owners, the latter of whom have grown hugely powerful in this time through their businesses taking on more monopolistic control. But yeah, still grappling with an idea of the setting and the era for it.

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  3. Posted: March 5, 2013In: Public

    Desperate to be free of his well meaning but molly-coddling family, a fiesty free-spirited granddad fakes his own death – with unintended consequences.

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2013 at 7:29 pm

    I love the amended logline, I'm already conjuring up images of the family and the grandfather, similar to that in the film 'Greedy'. There's plenty of room for conflict and comedy and it feels like the type of story that could sell.

    I love the amended logline, I’m already conjuring up images of the family and the grandfather, similar to that in the film ‘Greedy’. There’s plenty of room for conflict and comedy and it feels like the type of story that could sell.

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