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"As a wealthy upper-class young man enters adulthood during the second US civil war, he is suddenly disowned and ousted from his family estate, causing him to experience the life of the impoverished in a military-industrial society, eventually joining the ranks on the front line to prove to his father he deserves his inheritance."
Thanks for the feedback, I have a new logline up!
Thanks for the feedback, I have a new logline up!
See less?When an inexperienced journalist gets assigned to a military unit fighting in the second US civil war, he will have to fill the unlikely role of diplomat in order to prevent the war from reaching his home town.?
That's a good point. I think I was trying to give a sense of how uncorrupted the journalist is by his company and society in general. He has always had to fend off the aggressive propaganda of this future society and has always tried to do what felt right to him. The more experienced journalists whoRead more
That’s a good point. I think I was trying to give a sense of how uncorrupted the journalist is by his company and society in general. He has always had to fend off the aggressive propaganda of this future society and has always tried to do what felt right to him. The more experienced journalists who have been at it for years are all so ingrained in the system that they are completely unable to give unbiased, and 100% factual news anymore.
However, I agree it’s not essential for the logline:
When a journalist gets assigned to a military unit fighting in the second US civil war, he will have to fill the unlikely role of diplomat in order to prevent the war from reaching his home town.?
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See less?When an inexperienced journalist gets assigned to a military unit fighting in the second US civil war, he will have to fill the unlikely role of diplomat in order to prevent the war from reaching his home town.?
I see what you mean dpg, I guess I can hope that when they linger on this logline due to thinking about the 2nd civil war it'll get people hooked and thinking about the entire logline more instead of just immediately dismissing it. Thanks for the help and cheers!
I see what you mean dpg, I guess I can hope that when they linger on this logline due to thinking about the 2nd civil war it’ll get people hooked and thinking about the entire logline more instead of just immediately dismissing it.
Thanks for the help and cheers!
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