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When an emotionally shallow and hedonistic man inherits his father’s funeral home, he must confront his own mortality in order to keep the family business afloat and build a more meaningful life for himself.
Yep, that's definitely valid. It's all about selecting the most complementary elements, isn't it? I guess rather than his impulse-driven hedonism, it might be worth mentioning that he feels a desire to connect with his dead father through the work, or... yeah, this one needs a bit more pondering. ThRead more
Yep, that’s definitely valid. It’s all about selecting the most complementary elements, isn’t it?
I guess rather than his impulse-driven hedonism, it might be worth mentioning that he feels a desire to connect with his dead father through the work, or… yeah, this one needs a bit more pondering. Thanks.
See lessWhen conscripted into a brutal war, a team of army doctors must use laughter to stave off their own insanity, in order to save as many lives as they can.
I think on reflection I'd make this specifically about the Hawkeye character, perhaps framing him as angry or self-righteous, or hedonistic. Maybe impulse-driven.
I think on reflection I’d make this specifically about the Hawkeye character, perhaps framing him as angry or self-righteous, or hedonistic. Maybe impulse-driven.
See lessIn the future, AI is able to determine who has committed a crime, but when it appears to frame a rookie cop of murder, she must out smart a machine thinking 2 steps ahead to prove her innocence.
I'd really like a sense of this cop's inner arc. What does she need to learn in order to prevail at the end? Is there something, some fatal flaw that she needs to overcome or come to terms with, or some critical theme-statement-esque life lesson she's yet to learn that this particular journey will tRead more
I’d really like a sense of this cop’s inner arc. What does she need to learn in order to prevail at the end? Is there something, some fatal flaw that she needs to overcome or come to terms with, or some critical theme-statement-esque life lesson she’s yet to learn that this particular journey will teach her?
See lessHere’s a way you might be able to frame it:
When framed for a murder she didn’t commit, a rookie cop must [[insert arc here]] in order to prove her innocence and overcome the AI that framed her.
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If her antagonist is an AI, it sounds like you might be exploring the instinct/machine, or nature/industry dichotomy that films like Star Wars and the LOTR trilogy.
e.g. When framed for a murder she didn’t commit, a rookie cop must learn to trust her instincts in order to prove her innocence and overcome the AI that framed her.
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Or you might want her to think more like a machine:
e.g. When framed for a murder she didn’t commit, a rookie cop must become a better strategic thinker than the AI that framed her, in order to prove her innocence.