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  1. Posted: May 7, 2013In: Public

    When a human dies, they say that you see your life flashes before your eyes. What if you died and everything you see is the "flash of life" when you die? Death is an illusion. One day, a man wake's up and has deja vu's trough the day. He sees everything that's about to happen with him. He tries to find the answer.

    Zane Pinner
    Added an answer on May 7, 2013 at 10:52 am

    While I like philosophical explorations, it's really difficult to try and fit abstract concepts into a visual medium - it can obviously be done, but for the idea to have impact it needs to be handled with precision so that the audience is clear on what you're trying to get across. I'm just not sureRead more

    While I like philosophical explorations, it’s really difficult to try and fit abstract concepts into a visual medium – it can obviously be done, but for the idea to have impact it needs to be handled with precision so that the audience is clear on what you’re trying to get across.

    I’m just not sure what this film is about. He’s trying to find the answer but I’m not sure what is stopping him from finding it… or what the question is….

    Probably check spelling/grammar before submitting?

    Can you tell me this idea in two sentences? In one? I would maybe start with “One day…” and go from there.

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  2. Posted: May 6, 2013In: Public

    A disgraced cop pursues the serial killer who murdered his partner ten years ago, has resurfaced, and is killing again.

    Zane Pinner
    Added an answer on May 7, 2013 at 10:33 am

    Succinct, immediately identifiable narrative. Perhaps too familiar - I'm sure I've already seen this film! I think you could drop the "has resurfaced and is killing again" part as it's implied in the fact that the cop is pursuing him - perhaps a change to "before he kills again" to keep the story inRead more

    Succinct, immediately identifiable narrative. Perhaps too familiar – I’m sure I’ve already seen this film!

    I think you could drop the “has resurfaced and is killing again” part as it’s implied in the fact that the cop is pursuing him – perhaps a change to “before he kills again” to keep the story in the present?

    “A disgraced cop must stop the serial killer who murdered his partner from killing again.”

    Again, it’s a pretty standard crime thriller scenario, but fans of the genre love this stuff as long as the characters are interesting 🙂

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